Score: 4

"Lame"

submission: The Ricky Ray Show! Ep. 5

date: May 21, 2007

I don't really have anything wrong with it being perverted or anything of the such. But that just seems like all it's got going. Some parts were funny maybe like the first time he looks at her boobs bouncing for a "driving test". But other then that there's a lot of glitz and glamer for what is a bad one line joke. I think if there were more play on the characters like the main character who is desperate for some action as a joke then simply the joke being BOOBS LOLZ! It might be funnier or more interesting. Or less cliche jokes that don't fit (like the zooming out to earth and hearing the stereotypical asian whore-like lady screaming).

However good drawing, looks and sounds pretty professional, this episode just didn't have much else going for it.

Score: 5

"Pretentious"

submission: Alive

date: May 14, 2007

Overall I found this piece to be quite pretentious. It tries to be really deep and emotionally moving when there is nothing to really grasp on to. It's just a bunch of highly cliche images of the skinny african boy playing soccer, an astronaut looking at earth, etc. The fact that is was so cliche made it seem almost like a commercial to me, completely turning me off to the deep emotion it's trying to grasp. I mean what i get from it is "It's just lifee maaan. We all stop to look at the same eclipse so we are like all the same maan!" *take bong hit*.

But I liked your drawing style, and sometimes the crappy animation was charming. There are also some good moments where it's not so cliche like the newgrounds comment added some comic relief and I guess I'm just one of very few who were turned off by something this corny so I guess you can take my comment with a grain of salt.

Score: 9

"hahhaahah love it"

submission: Death of a Kat

date: March 13, 2007

Hahahha great short, clever, funny, and to the point. :D down with the Kitty Krew and Clock Crew and all of those uncreative spammers.